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Train tracks that run along some abandoned buildings in Jackson, MI.

Taken in color, converted to grayscale and adjusted levels with picasa2.

Let me know what you think, good or bad. :)

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It's a really interesting perspective. I'd like to see a sepia toned version actually, I think it might look interesting.

I love how the further along the photo, the more highlights there are- it gives it a nice focus and draws the eye along. The powerlines and the building assists in the composition also.

I don't really have anything bad to say about it. I like the subject- old buildings are among some of my favourite things. But as much as i like the greyscale, it might need a tad more colour- even if only slightly adjusted [too much would ruin it in my opinion.]

Nice work. :]

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I was actually playing around with some different effects, but decided to do as little modification as possible. I don't like to do a lot of editing to my photographs, as I'm trying to become a better photographer, not manipulator. :)

I really, really appreciate the feedback though, and I am glad that you enjoyed the exposure. I've been reading a lot about photography in order to improve mine, and your comments seem to confirm that I am heading in the right direction. Thanks again.
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I definitely dig it Ben.

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August 28, 2007
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
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Aug 25, 2007, 7:13:23 PM

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